My revision process has changed though the semester by learning to add more of my point view/ideas into my paper as well as writing a better topic sentence to make my paper flow. I was able to use a lot of textual evidence and explaining it by not much of my thoughts in at first but now I am able to put more of my ideas and thoughts in. Being able to put more of me into my paper is very useful since it gives an idea of what you think into the paper and let readers get what you are trying to say from the writing. Having a good topic sentences and making the paragraphs connect in a paper was also important. I have learned to make my paper flow nicely and be bale to organize the paragraphs in a way that make more sense so that it looks like a well developed paper. I also learned to split up a long paragraph into two. I learned the idea that even if the two paragraphs is about the same idea it can still be split it up since it took over at least a page of the paper. I use to understand that one paragraph per idea and now I learned a new technique. These writing skills made me improve on writing but also a better format for my paper. I am grateful to learn about these skills since I am able to put more of my thoughts in and explain what I think about the idea more than just explaining the texts. Introduction was also something that I have improves throughout the semester. I noticed that my first paper did not have good thesis and flow into what my paper is about. My second paper was a lot better but needed work on how to incorporate all the authors and their articles. I realize that paper 3 is when I got the hang of putting everything in and have a good introduction.